I always forget how annoying this woman is to edit. You have to constantly keep pay attention to her lips and what that smile is doing, making sure its consistent moment to moment through her scenes.
No, no, Richard you had her start grinning a couple pages ago, you can't do it again.
ARGH!!!
Mine mostly just "raise one eyebrow." Although, when the male protagonist tries to do that, the female counterpart tells him- "You look like you are trying to hold in a sneeze."
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